Awww...u have made me one happy camper tonight...<3
Wow, geez. The word I'm thinking of right now is 'beautiful'. Yes, I loved the way you made this. Past, Present, Future, Brilliant. Gah, that really tugged at my heart strings.
Starting off with Isshin and Ryuu in college was an awesome start of the story. So sweet, and I feel like imagining their college love life a lot more now. <3 And comparing their wives' deaths, just wow. Great work with that, I felt it. And aw, ya jus can't help comparing Isshin and Ryuu to Ichi and Uryuu, and you did it so entirely well! I love how they are so similar, and u just made it THAT much more beleiveable. Awesome job. Just making the subtle gestures and things similar, nyaa, so beautiful!! <3 ...see, again with the word 'beautiful'.
Very sweet job. Their last conversation was a great ender. ...And They actually seemed pretty in-character to me. Who cares anyway, that's wat fanfictions all about. :D Anyway, I loved this. It really touched me, and u did a schweet job. ^^
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Wow, geez. The word I'm thinking of right now is 'beautiful'. Yes, I loved the way you made this. Past, Present, Future, Brilliant. Gah, that really tugged at my heart strings.
Starting off with Isshin and Ryuu in college was an awesome start of the story. So sweet, and I feel like imagining their college love life a lot more now. <3 And comparing their wives' deaths, just wow. Great work with that, I felt it. And aw, ya jus can't help comparing Isshin and Ryuu to Ichi and Uryuu, and you did it so entirely well! I love how they are so similar, and u just made it THAT much more beleiveable. Awesome job. Just making the subtle gestures and things similar, nyaa, so beautiful!! <3 ...see, again with the word 'beautiful'.
Very sweet job. Their last conversation was a great ender. ...And They actually seemed pretty in-character to me. Who cares anyway, that's wat fanfictions all about. :D Anyway, I loved this. It really touched me, and u did a schweet job. ^^