This fic was pretty hot. Love the dialogue between the two.

I found a few typos, and it would be great if you corrected them:

"... whispers AN apology.."
"..his his hips..'

and uh, this part just makes me stop for a while because it's quite odd to be reading the same words. Use a thesaurus?
"pulls up... both sitting up"
And the paragraphs where you repeated the words 'tightly' and 'release'
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Don't get me wrong, your writing is fantastic. (and I cannot write for peanuts anyway.)