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2010-07-08 10:22 am (UTC)
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Haaah, yep, this definitly made my morning. Your porn is never just a PWP, but got background and emotion.
(It maybe sounds strange, but I really like that you used present tense in this one - it makes the story imminent and catching)
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(It maybe sounds strange, but I really like that you used present tense in this one - it makes the story imminent and catching)