Oh, darling, why so hesitant? This is absolutely lovely and really quite convincing. Not kidding; this sounds just like something Arthur would do. (Although I wonder at the prospects of finding someone who is almost, almost like Eames because that might be good enough for me ;) if reality wouldn't intervene all the time, that is.)
Reading this was like enjoying a scoop of vanilla ice cream on a sunny day: slow, sweet, melting slightly under the growing heat as time passes and you're letting the taste hit your tongue--the taste of shy but potent timidity, not due to lack of want but rather lack of experience.
I think you're feeling your way through the characters and doing it veeeery well. Do keep writing, love ♥
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Date: 2010-08-06 08:43 am (UTC)Reading this was like enjoying a scoop of vanilla ice cream on a sunny day: slow, sweet, melting slightly under the growing heat as time passes and you're letting the taste hit your tongue--the taste of shy but potent timidity, not due to lack of want but rather lack of experience.
I think you're feeling your way through the characters and doing it veeeery well. Do keep writing, love ♥
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