This fic is absolutely breathtaking. From the start, I was hooked. It felt different and somehow, you managed to bring all these threads together so that by the time we reach the timeline we know of, everything just fits perfectly. Not only that, but it makes me want to re-watch the movie with your story in mind just to figure out how they are feeling at every single point in time.
You've fleshed all these characters so well, and you've managed to make their reactions to each other realistic: how impossible it is for them to stay away from each other, but how both of their issues prevents them from making it work until they finally have a sit down.
I especially love that conversation near the end, where they both think that the other one is in charge. I have to say, I had my own opinion while reading the fic, but by seeing it through their eyes, I can see how they could have thought the opposite.
But I can't pick a favourite part, everything is brilliant. Their banter, the sometimes bitterness that creeps through, the undeniable love for each other, everything, I loved everything.
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You've fleshed all these characters so well, and you've managed to make their reactions to each other realistic: how impossible it is for them to stay away from each other, but how both of their issues prevents them from making it work until they finally have a sit down.
I especially love that conversation near the end, where they both think that the other one is in charge. I have to say, I had my own opinion while reading the fic, but by seeing it through their eyes, I can see how they could have thought the opposite.
But I can't pick a favourite part, everything is brilliant. Their banter, the sometimes bitterness that creeps through, the undeniable love for each other, everything, I loved everything.