[identity profile] kiyala.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] shannys_corner
Title: Similarity
Author: [livejournal.com profile] kiyala
Word Count: 326
Fandom: Bleach
Pairing: Kurosaki Ichigo / Ishida Uryuu
Rating: G
Warnings: nothing ._.
Disclaimer: Kubo Tite owns Bleach
Notes: A drabble, because I needed to type something, and my assignment isn't getting far enough to give me enough typey-typey.

For [livejournal.com profile] 30_smiles theme 19 - mirror

x-posted to [livejournal.com profile] ishi_ichi and [livejournal.com profile] 30_smiles




They never realised how similar they were, because they were always too caught up with how different they were supposed to be. Quincy. Shinigami. Complete opposites. That was just the unquestionable way that things were.

They were too busy noticing the way one was quiet and the other was loud.

They didn’t notice the way in which they were both irritatingly stubborn.

They were too busy noticing the way one would rush into things and the other would hold back and come up with a plan.

They didn’t notice the way in which they would do everything in their power to accomplish whatever it was they set out to do.

They were too busy noticing the way one was always alone and the other was always surrounded by people.

They didn’t notice the way in which neither of them ever smiled.

Until…


“You know, you two are pretty smiliar,” Mizuiro comments absently, observing the two during one rare lunch time when Ishida has joined them on the rooftop.

Both of them look up in silence. Ichigo speaks.

“What the hell are you talking about?”

Everyone else in their group is looking at them as well now, their attention captured by someone else speaking the words they were afraid to.

“Think about it,” Mizuiro replies calmly.

They think about it.

“I don’t see it,” Ichigo says.

There is a short silence, and Ishida speaks. “I do.”

Ichigo frowns, and thinks harder. They are too different. He doesn’t understand how they can be so similar. He starts coming up with proof as to why they are not similar.

Another moment passes, and his eyes widen.

“Yeah. I do, too.”

The rest of the group look from Mizuiro, to the two boys, in utter disbelief. Ishida looks at Ichigo, and Ichigo looks back.

And slowly, almost as if they are trying to stop themselves from doing it, they both smile. Their smiles, reflected in each other's, are enough to convince them.


Date: 2007-09-26 03:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katsuyakaiba69.livejournal.com
So true.

And this is too cute for words XD

It makes me feel all warm inside.

Date: 2007-09-26 04:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renjifan.livejournal.com
I actually got warm fuzzies... my stomach went all twisty at the end when they smiled. Oh, so so good.

Date: 2007-09-26 05:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sajiu93.livejournal.com
Hehehe,feeling very warm and fuzzy now. ^__^

Date: 2007-09-26 08:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fayedoll.livejournal.com
Awwwww my fic-writing angel ♥

and good luck on the ebil assignments >.

Date: 2007-09-26 10:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] orin.livejournal.com
Lovelylovely drabble~ Not too short and just long enough to get the picture across, which you did perfectly. <3<3

And I loved that ending. =3 <3

Date: 2007-09-26 01:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] akuni.livejournal.com
Awww, short and sweet. :) They really are a lot alike, and you really do see the similarities by looking at their differences. (Ok have I just had too much cold medicine, or did that actually make sense?)

I think there's a teeny mistake in the last line of the first paragraph - a word left out, perhaps?

Date: 2007-09-26 01:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] akuni.livejournal.com
Oh good. I was afraid I'd had one too many cups of neo-citran. XD My taste for IchiIshi has been declining (because of the lack of good offerings, as we talked about before), so it's nice to see something like this that makes you think about it, rather than just throwing porn at you (though we like that too. :D).

I dunno what you changed, but I meant this line: "That was just unquestionable way that things were."

*wobbles off to pretend to do work* :D

Date: 2007-09-26 01:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] akuni.livejournal.com
Gah I'm sorry, I suck. :( I thought it should've been "That was just THE unquestionable way that things were."

I'm gonna stop making an ass of myself now, kthxbai. ._.

Date: 2007-09-26 04:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] belledewinter.livejournal.com
Ohh, how wonderful. ♥ I loved it!

Date: 2007-09-26 06:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] materia-indigo.livejournal.com
That was really sweet! And the characterization was right on.

Date: 2007-09-26 10:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nightrobin11.livejournal.com
Ha, I liked this topic. This was simply sweet. Wow, amazing and only rated G. Nice work!! ^^

Date: 2007-09-27 04:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ediblewoodwinds.livejournal.com
Oh goodness. That was just pretty.

It was sweet and frankly, I really did enjoy that.
Your writing is never disappointing. ♥♥

Date: 2007-09-27 07:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grass-angel.livejournal.com
Absolutely adorable and something I've always vaguely wanted to happen in canon.

Date: 2007-10-02 12:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lifeinahole27.livejournal.com
*snuggles into this*

Somehow I missed this when it was posted. Or I was definitely sleeping... nevermind.

I like how I can actually feel the words. And their smiles.

*snuggles into it more*

Date: 2007-10-02 01:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] realitywaiting.livejournal.com
yay for the bunny fuzzies of it all! seriously! warm tingles!

Date: 2007-10-02 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lpdrunknmunky.livejournal.com
“Think about it,” Mizuiro replies calmly.

They think about it.

That's great, lol.

Date: 2007-10-02 08:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] m-buggie.livejournal.com
Man, I am falling behind. How could I have missed this story, too? Well, I'm glad I backtracked and found it because it was absolutely fab. Great work, as usual.
;)

Date: 2007-10-06 03:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dndchic.livejournal.com
warm fuzzies all around. ^_^

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